its fresh and original. minimal spelling mistakes. please update and im definitley not one to turn down a lemon xD

ooohh! so CLOSE!

XD

please update!

Of course, who is going to turn down a lemon?  I'm really enjoying this story, you are an awesome writer.  I love stories where InuYasha and Kagome are together and he's a cheater, and you are doing a great job with that theme, your writing is very fresh and engrossing...