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I really like your story! I've enjoyed reading it so much, so far and I'm glad you are going to finish it, no matter how long it might take :) 

I hope another chapter comes out soon.

I found your story read it through  its really good please update soon

I can't wait  for the next chapter!

I m so glad you updated this fic please keeep writing the main thing ia yet to happen our sessho kago getting together that is so plz plz plz keep writing 

The witch doctor them proceeded to reach into her robes and pull out a pair of classes that when put on magnified her already large eyes.

I think you meant to say 'though' instead of 'through.'

The witch doctor them proceeded to reach into her robes and pull out a pair of classes that when put on magnified her already large eyes.

I'm sure you meant to say 'glasses' instead of classes.

I notice that when you spell woman, you are using the peril version of the word. You are spelling "women" instead of "woman." You do this in every chapter.

She is going to. Freak. Out.

I was not expecting this twist.

Now!

That was hot.Kagome is so take charge.

Or else!

The cow thing was hilarious. 

i have to say this story sucked me in... I read the whole thing today... lol... i loved ch 27 the best... when Kagome was poking him "touching the untouchable"... I laughed so hard, I think my RA actually came out to see what was going on... hehe... keep it coming... btw what art school did you go to??? i am currently looking for one that may have connections for an animation internship... its really hard to find one where i live...

Ooh... At the top,

"He wrinkled his nose. ‘She wreaks.’"

You meant "reeks" right? I wonder if Sesshoumaru's shoes squeek to... -jumps up- Well food for thought. I shall continue!

Near the end, 

"Sesshoumaru walked over to a tree and snapped a small branch off. Using his clays to carve a crutch for the Miko to put her weight on."

I believe you meant "Claws" not "Clays" to carve, correct? Oh that was just rich how she threw a purified mud ball at him on accedent!

Hey... -curious- How long did you choose to make the chain?

Oh I like this story so far. My favorite part:

"The elder narrowed his eyes and looked a little put out for a second. Sesshoumaru couldn’t help but feel the erg to shift his feet. For only the elder could make someone who was centuries old feel like a young pup again."

How you had him wanting to fidget. -grins-

Youch lol