Wow is she spoiled :D, what a life....this was a well written excellent read, Well done:D
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Sep 2010
Very interesting beginning and hope you continue this story along with the other six sins :).
Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Sep 2010
Very nice. That was a good way to introduce that. It would be easy to see how Kagome could get used to all the attentions being Lady of the West would afford. I'm sure she fought it at first but then slowly started to give in. Great Job.
I enjoyed the literary flow and thoughtyour piece well written. I wish there had been more plot, but that is personal preference, not so much a critique. Will these be interconnected one shots or stand alones?
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