Intersting.
| Nice little one-shot. I remember that story and I wouldn't have thought about turning it into a fanfiction like this, but it's a very good idea. Gosh, they should have tried that in the show, although I dont want her to end up with Inuyasha, but whatever, lol. Very well written, I like it =) There is almost much potential in it, if it is to ever be expanded.    
 
miwa03 (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Nov 2009 | Nice story! Maybe they should've done it a long time ago. Just split him in half for his inconsistency! lol Great writing!    
 | HaHa this was great!! :) I think I saw a fanart about this a while back, did you base it off of that?    
 | LOVE IT!!!!!!!!    
 | Cute!  That was a clever idea, and you did a great job writing it...    
       
 
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