| very well written , it would have been easier to read though if you had spaced the paragraphs and sentences , but other then that very very good story and will love to see how it progresses
| Good read, enjoyed it very much. I wonder who the assistant will be
Jess (Chapter 1) - Mon 26 May 2008
| Great story and loved how it was going on a single spark hope you update lots on this new site!!
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