Awesome but I hate the way everyone treated the poor pup. Even Sesshomaru. Keep up the good work.
What a great story I wish to read more please.
Great story. Keep up the great work and update soon!
wow.....
I like it!!
so, when will you give us the next chapter....???? pleasssseeeee....?
omg i luv the way thiz story went i enjoyed keep on writing
Damn, *sniffles* You made me cry!
Interesting.
You have to watch what you´re writing, some details do not make sense. Like how can Sango be about sixty when Kagome´s son was already fifty, that means she was about ten when she was married and already had the twins???? It´s strange that she´s alive at all, people at that time did not age well and died about fifty/sixty.
There can´t be a courtyard from Sunset shrine at that time either, it´s five-hundred years in the past and no shrine or temple is that old; be a bit more realistic. Old shrines are about 150 years in Japan not more. Normal people at that time did not have surnames either so don´t take that idiotic idea and say that Sango and Miroku are the first Higurashi´s af if there are no other people left. Sango and Miroku lived like all the other people in the village in a small hut so stick with that.
And how come that Rin was already engaged to Kohaku? You say that Kagome returned two years ago and at that time Rin should be about ten or eleven, no older and that´s really disgusting that a girl at that age should already be engaged. You shouldn´t forget that from being a child to being an adult she should first be a teenager. THINK first and then write or no one will take this fic seriously. It never hurts to be realistic.
I love this story I cant wait till the next chapter
OMG!OMG!OMG! UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was awesome. You should like extend in into like twenty or thirty chapters!!!
0o0o0o0o i hope she's got some insane powers and she's pissed at everyone for how they have treated her son! i hope she loves Sessmomma to no end for all the love she's given that boy, and that everyone is afraid of the angelmiko! >:3 you. must. update.s0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0on!!!!
You better continue this i want to see Kagome go off on Seshsoumaru and every one else
Different story. I hope you have kags Really ride Sess's ass. I get he was upset at the loss of his mate but what he did to his kid is so wrong. I hope she makes he really regret what he did and not just brush it under the door.
A note from me.
I want to thank you all for your wonderful reviews - those with accounts or not - and that I do plan on continuing this story. I have a few ideas dancing around in my brain and am kind of combining old plot ideas into it. It's going to be a fun experience and I just desperately hope that I do not lose any of you readers, for you are what keeps me going. I kidd you not... I'm horrible at updating, so the fact I've gotten four chapters up is rather amazing. . .
and to make up for the shortness of the last two chapters, this next one will be amazing. It's going to entail the reunion of our favorite lovers. <333
Hm, perhaps there'll be a lemon? XD
SEQUEL PLEASE
I love the story please continue I want to know what happens nexted.
WOW i really like this story...I wonder who that is...LOL Update soon.
Ahh, now that's what I'm talking about...
I can't wait to see where you take this :)
yanno i hope that it is kagome returning as a youkai, and she's pissed as all get out at everyone for how they treated her son. man alive i would love that >:3 i can totally see her being like *heads roll* and eyes narrow!
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