AWESOME STORU PLEASE UPLOAD NEW CHAPTER SOON
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Great work!!!!. Keep it up. ;)
that was so cool ! I'm grateful for that push I gave you 2 type out this brilliance !!!
and about this chapter.. I just wanna say my opinion.. i like doing so xD
so anyways .. i liked the idea when he said that he doesnt want 2 meet her for the 3 moons 2 come.. that shall give her some time to mourn and free her heart of InuYasha or at least clear some space for Sesshoumaru to enter.. tho if you dont want her to fall in love with him its ok .. if they are gonna spend the rest pf eternity together then what the heck ! :P
(p.s dont tell me of what she'll feel in the future to him i dnt wanna ruin the fun of 'waiting to find out') xD
and Sesshoumaru was kinda sweet :P when he didnt push her .. if he were a pig he would have just proved her wrong by mating with her .. that way he would physically say that she was ready and all ...
sorry for ranting again but i told u i like giving my opinions on stuff :D and u like hearing/reading it *dont deny it* :P LOL
-RmRm << my nickname :P
Very nicely done chapter, I like how hot the intimacy scene was without becoming vulger in the least. Also like how you ended that scene and how Kagome went about explaining her feelings to Sesshoumaru. His reactions were spot on.
Can't wait for more!
Wispr
I have questions. He's very cruel to entertain the thought of murdering a pup of his simply because it's a hanyou. And it's still murder by causing her to miscarry. I have a sneaky feeling he's used that potion before to rid himself of an unwanted pup from a rut be it hanyou or a full bastard. Am I wrong or right? That takes a cold, heartless person to force a female to miscarry with or without their knowledge.
I know it was the custom then for the woman to be acknowledged before she could speak but did he mean she could only speak freely in their bedroom to him or the home? That it was outside of the home and visitors that she follow the custom? Inside the home should be the same as in the bedroom unless there were visitors of importance.
I don't blame him for being angry with her. That was rather cruel of her to let him get that far and than change her mind. Also, why giggle to herself afterwards. That was rather silly and immature.
Sesshoumaru is not completely likeable in this story so far. I hope in time some changes for the good take place within him. And now Kagome irritated me with what she just did.
One last question. Genes were not known about in those days unless the most intelligent of the youkai with knowledge of the body inside and out somehow discovered genes and DNA centuries ahead of the humans. Was that your intent?
Awwww, poor sessh, he really has a few dilemmas to be solved ;p. Great chapter as always.
Great chapter, I like how Kagome was able to prove that her pups would be full blooded and the ending was hilarious!
OMG ! O.O i loved the update ! and you got their rolls right :P I mean Kagome is known to be persistant 'till she achieves what she wants and that's exactly what she did when she wanted to prove her point, even though she wasn't ready yet for any major step. And Sesshoumaru is all about honor and pure full-blooded inu-youkai bloodline,and that's what applies on when he 'thought' that he'll kill the pup if it were half-breed.. good job and update sooner PLEASE !! i really really really like this story ! it's got unique ideas :P keep up the good work *thumbs up*
-Reema xD 'the one who is still waiting for the juicy stuff' ha-ha.
okay odd question so by kagome find the spring healer she will be come a mutan? or deamon? or a mutan that can bore full deamon babies?
or was the spring healer a way of causeing her genes to evolve at a faster rate then normal humand thus making her immortal in hanceing her powers to were she can have full deamon children?
okay need les to say I watch alot of Sci-fi heroe's and X men are some of my faves so I am trying to figure this out
but good update XD
do so again soon
I really like how you did Sesshoumaru's reasoning and Kagome's first reaction to his offer. Very nice touch with how they might be able to have full blooded children.
Another great chapter, you did good work on Sesshoumaru's reasoning and Kagome's reactions. Also I like Kagome's thoughts on just what it means to be immortal.
WOW! that was great! please write more...
Well, here's my review for the story up till now: I like it :3 A lot. BTW cool idea with the spring-healer and legend. I kept imagining a leech like thingy :p But somehow wasn't grossed-out :3 Kudos. Sorry for not reveiwing before now, it was wrong > < .
Now, for this chapter: Wait, wait, wait....She's going to accept being subervient to him? Really? ...Doesn't she have a little more pride than that?
She's only just foud all this out and she's looking at tying herself to a contract with him when she has all of forever to find someone else or make something else out of her life or make him fall in love with her (although I doubt she has any romantic prefernce to him a the moment). That part just kind of onfuses me.
Thankyou ofr the update~
You know i saw this story and wondered about it.
now that i have read it, it sound interesting.
altho i would not give sesshomaru the time of day what a bastard.
He is just as bad as naraku. He is using her for his gain only.
she good enough to run a house, to sleep with but not good enough to have kids with. you cannot have your part of a person and not all of a person.
I hope that Kags finds out what she's looking for!!!!!!!! Awesome chapter ;)
SWEEET! i found another that i like so much... plz write some more!
Hi, I just have met this fanfic yesterday and I couldn´t stop reading. It´s definitely very interesting and I like yous writing style, since my main language isn´t english I don´t know much about spelling errors but I think you write very well. Keep doing sucha great work. Can´t wait for the next chapter
What a great story. The chapters were so moving...I felt so bad for Kagome and Inuyasha. I can't wait to find out what comes next.
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