Oh, I can't wait for more! I just love how you characterize a young Sesshoumaru.
Wow, I truly enjoyed reading that chapter. Love how he provided for her and now really wants to keep her. Bravo! I can't wait to read more. :D
EAConwell (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
| beyond cute! and i love your writing style. please update soon =)
lalala (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
ahaha stating his claim to others! :D so cute
i WAS REALLY STARTING TO GET INTO IT! Great fic so far! I really enjoyed reading it!
Good luck.
Darcy (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
Love the story!
Eliza (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
Oh I really like this story! I really hope you add more soon!! :D Little Sesshoumaru is so cute!! =P
| I've decided to check out dokuga.com again and I came upon your fiction, the first and top of many others. I'm glad you started with this one, it is absolutely catching. I love how you portray the younger Sesshoumaru, it is so him. I love this younger Sesshoumaru very much, wait! Scratch that, I believe I have fallen in love with this younger version. Your storyline is mostly irresistable, it should be under the MUST READ category if there is such a category on dokuga. I will wait for your next chapter with some patience. It has become one of my many addictions. Thank you for giving us readers a great story to read. I read "The Bargain," and I must say, I enjoyed that as well. You allow me to see and understand Sesshoumaru a little bit more by giving insights of him as a child. Thank you again!
| Sweeettt!
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Sun 27 Sep 2009
Kagome is so lucky. Even though she is sick, Sesshoumaru doesn't leave her. He knows that he will be in trouble with his father and made fun of at home for failing his test, but he stays with her. What a wonderful child. I wonder what will happen to Hisoka? Will both of them get into trouble for the failed hunt? Please post more soon.
diana (Chapter 3) - Fri 25 Sep 2009
| will this be a continuing story? I love it so please keep it up!
| Awwwwww that was soooooooooo cute i absolutly loved it update again really soon i cant wait to read more of ur adorable story :D ill keep an eye out for the update :D
| oh, wow, I'm so excited you have another story that you are posting. For a few days I think I was going through some "forthright/Impeccable" withdrawal:) Anyway, I know I've read a few stories in the past where Kagome was hurled back through time to when Sesshoumaru was a child but every one tends to have a fresh take on it and I'm incredibly excited to read your perspective. Keep up the excellent work!
autumngold (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Sep 2009
| Sesshoumaru is so sweet taking care of Kagome. I like how blunt he is, telling her she smells bad, etc. Thanks for the update! Post more soon please!
stars (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Sep 2009
| please updata soon and make it longer.
miki (Chapter 3) - Thu 24 Sep 2009
| I'm waiting to see what will happen, it's really good and shessomaru is so cute.
This chapter however was really really short
| Interesting. Its sad I adore little Sessho more then his grown self.
| I really like where you are taking this, loved the new chapter. I can't wait for more :)
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
| I can already see Kagome changing the future Sesshomaru by working with his younger self. I'm so anxious to know what will happen now! ^.^
| aw.. I like her explaination. and his concernm. >D so cute.
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