Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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mary (Chapter 28) - Fri 05 Feb 2010

huh? <confused frown> what riddle? and what's with the quote?


Rowdys girl (Chapter 28) - Fri 05 Feb 2010

I do not know how you could cut this back to 300 words. As with so many of your little vignettes, every word has its value as a part of the whole. I do love how you wove "keh" and "hnn" into the story. My first thought was, oh, that's where they got it from! LOL! And, for a second, I was tortured with the idea that you would make Kagome into Izayoi, but I dismissed that one. She is Higurashi and would not allow herself to fall into that role. Not the Higurashi that you are creating. She is not weak, never weak, and that is part of her charm.

I found 1 (one) thing only: “When [in] it pleases him to do so,” I can only believe that you are trying to help cure me of my OCD, and I thank you.

Rowdy


lady_myth (Chapter 27) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

I know you're writing these chapters based on prompts, but I have a couple guesses of where you could be going with this? Maybe it's my eternal, or rather infernal, optimistic attitude...but perhaps will Kagome save Sesshoumaru from some reiki-wielding human? They haven't encountered her powers at all at this point! Maybe then she would become endeared by InuTaisho...thus leading to his eventual acceptance of Izayoi.

My other thought is maybe when Kagome eventually returns to her "feudal" time, (cause that HAS to happen, otherwise how do she and Sess hook up?!?!), I was wondering if something like Inuyasha appearing through the well to come and get her would happen. Since Sess sees Kagome as "his", and he is young, and spoiled, and very possessive...to see Inuyasha stealing away Kagome, and Sess being "powerless" to stop it, he comes to hate the individual Inuyasha with a passion. A kind of "first love" unrequited feeling about that too.  Imagine how royally pissed he'd be when he realized it was his half-brother who gets the pleasure of Kagome's company...until Kagome suddenly "realizes" she knows Sess.

Gods, if this plays out right, I can't imagine what Sess has been going through what with seeing Kagome and realizing she doesn't know him...yet...

Oh, I get tingles thinking about it. Damn prompts, and waiting for them to inspire you! Keep up the good work!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 27) - Sun 31 Jan 2010

omg thats embarrassing!  Wow i cant stop reading your fics :D they r so good i cant wait for another update continue soon much love peace out

 

shannah


loveyaa (Chapter 27) - Sat 30 Jan 2010

This was quite funny. Poor Kagome, atleast it just solidifies that little Sesshoumaru actually cares for her. Now if only we could see how this will affect the big Sesshoumaru (if Kagome ever gets back). til next time...


GreyEcho (Chapter 27) - Sat 30 Jan 2010

Poor Kagome, that sucks. At least she wash able to have a hot bath.


chelletastica (Chapter 27) - Sat 30 Jan 2010

Awz poor Kagome that would be horrible. You never see stories that bring up that topic but you have to wonder what woman did do back then, especially the girls in the Inutachi who had to be constantly on the road fighting..shivers I'm very glad I'm a modern girl =]. Basically I love this chapter =].


Snowfall (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

*giggle*  Poor Sesshoumaru.  I wonder how his father is going to explain this one!  LOL  I would love to see Sessmom watch him give it a go.  Hilarious picture of stuttering father and amused mother.  *snicker*  Though, I'm sure that if it is ever explained, Kagome will have to do it.  ^_^  Cute chapter!


kimakaanna (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

I just love Sesshomaru's mom!! lolz! That little after thought was funny! Anywho, brilliant chapter as always!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

Isn't amazing to find humor in ingrained bigotry? Such a wonderful chapter! But I say that about all of your work! LOL. It had occurred to me that she might find herself in this predicament; I am not surprised that you handled it so well and in such a funny manner.


autumngold (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

Poor Kagome, I would have just died of embarassment!  I think I wouldn't bathe after hearing that the pool would have to be drained after I entered it though.  Plus all of the blood that she would leave behind.  Great update!


Alon (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

This might sound a little creepy, but it's the first; FIRST time I want someone to update RIGHT THIS MINUTE. Preferably writing another 30 chapters before stopping for a break--but that's insane. This lovely fic has made me go 'WTF. WTFFF. WHY IS IT SO SHORT? HEELLOOO?! MOREPLZ.' this usually... Does. Not. Happen. <3
I love lil Sesshoumaru to bits. <3 And Kagome is her wonderful self. Not to mention the lovely neko has grown on me. (;
Update soon? [NOW. NOOOOW]


WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

I think I agree with Kagome about keeping girl stuff secret from Sesshou. It is kinda hard to explain to a young man. I'd bite the bullet and talk to Sesshou's mother as well. But I wonder if Sesshou will be persistent about learning more about a human female's period. Also, I'm still curious about how this will change the future Sesshou. Keep up the good work and update soon :p


Tilayha (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

Poor Kagome! Can't wait for the next update!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 27) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

hahaha i love how you poke at the " in heat thing" >:3 amusing ^_^ though i cant help but wonder if we'll see any peaks at the older current Sesshomaru whie this is happening ^_^


stars (Chapter 26) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

please updata


Tilayha (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

the more I read this the more I like it. It is original and has an innocents to it that I have not seen in many of the other stories I have read. It figures that in order to see Sesshoumaru as a believable softy is to make him a child to kagome's almost adult. Wonderful read!


FourShotChild (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

I just wanted to say that I simply love this story. I look forward to every new chapter. Thank you so much for posting quickly! Good luck in future writings!


autumngold (Chapter 26) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

I love Sesshoumaru's confidence!  I can't wait to see Kagome's reaction when he solves the riddle!  Thanks for the update!


Snowfall (Chapter 26) - Fri 22 Jan 2010

I wonder what riddles Sesshoumaru believes he has solved.  ^_^  Very interesting.


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