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Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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darksilvercloud (Chapter 57) - Fri 25 Jun 2010

a private moment between the two :)


Melly (Chapter 57) - Fri 25 Jun 2010

^_^


Rocks (Chapter 56) - Fri 25 Jun 2010

What a cute little story I love it. Some of the short chapter are confusing. Like the one with Sesshomaru's Father and it ending with an egg. I was hoping it was referring to egg on your face. But other wise this story has some nice twists and turns. Thanks for the read. 


KyonKyon01 (Chapter 56) - Thu 24 Jun 2010

I hate to keep gushing...but he is just soooo cute!!! XD  I loved seeing his "inspection of the grounds".  It was so adorable to see him doing the little rainy day diversions that children often do.  I think my favorite, though was saving the snail from the puddle and letting it loose in his mother's peonies.  It's such a glimpse into his nature.  It's such an innocent thing to do, but still unwittingly mischevious to unleash the little gastropod in his mothers favorite flowers.  I love it ^_^

The very end was also particularly nice.  To have the slight tinge of his conscious tugging at him for secreting away Kagome's button was again, just so sweet.  Oooo!  So cute! XD  I can't stand it!  Keep up the good work ^_^ 


Lauren (Chapter 56) - Wed 23 Jun 2010

Oh my god, Sesshomaru is too fucking adorable for words. That's actually a pretty good lesson - finding items hidden in plain sight. Sharpens the senses...


GreyEcho (Chapter 56) - Wed 23 Jun 2010

aw~! I like the story behind it. lol and i love how it ended up in the rafters.


Indigo_miko (Chapter 56) - Wed 23 Jun 2010

Little Sesshomaru putting off his studies by 'surveying the grounds'...cute. Little Sesshomaru playing a game with Kagome...cuter. Little Sesshomaru taking the button and keeping it even when he grows into big scary Sesshomaru...cutest! It just makes me want to melt into a puddle of awwws.


loveyaa (Chapter 56) - Wed 23 Jun 2010

Once again I especially enjoyed this chapter. I love it when things come together from different perspectives (this case 2 perspectives from the same person). I like these chapters that show us the "future" and then go to the past to explain it. it was a cute episode and shows that Sesshoumaru really did treasure it and kept it all that time. I look forward to more of these...I to will be looking :)


Darrakk (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Really love your writing here, and I am so glad you're updating faster! Though still not fast enough for my liking, its too good to wait for. Though wait we will eh? Keep up the good writing please!


Brego Whitecloud (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Wonderfully done!  I especially love the fact that he was too old for childish games, yet he played like a little boy in the rain. 

 

As always, a joy to read.

 

Well done!

 

BW


Melly (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

So simple and precious to save a button as a token for all those years!  I think I remember the older Sesshomaru taking a button from his sleeve when he learned Kagome and Higurashi were the same person...?  I think every little kid has a box full of treasures like that.  The little everyday things are the ones we remember the most.  I absolutely love your portrayal of younger Sesshomaru... he's so adorable and huggable.  I want to "awwwww!" after I read every chapter~!  Thank you for writing such beautiful (and longer) stories.  This one really brightened up my day. ^_^


laenfante (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

I, too, had wondered how the treasured button had come to find a home among Sesshoumaru's memories. And now we all know.  This story always brings a smile; thank you.


JP (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Nice tie in with searching for the button, Kagome eventually missing searching for her.


Manatee (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Ah what a refreshing chapter!  I loved this one, I think I had a goofy smile on my lips the whole time.  Thanks for the fantastic update.


Sala (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

CUTE!  I love the idea of chibi Sesshoumaru of keeping Kagome's button as a treasure. :)


(Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

AWWW, that was a cute chapter! Sesshoumaru also learned a good lesson by having to discern Hisoka's counsel....something that can happen as a leader and plotting advisors, eh? I look forward to the next update.


cbrendible (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

that was awesome! i'm so really excited to get to read some more.


hopuchan (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

aww! so that's how he got the button! i feel all warm and gooey inside from this chappy! so sweet!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 56) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

A perfect mood lifter!


Dark Phoenix (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

I love this fic...I have to read the new chapter as soon as I see the email saying you updated. I'm addicted =P Please update soon!


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