I've never seen a poem be so steamy! This was both sexy, but also very romantic. Its nice reading about the two of them as two deeply in love individuals.

DELICIOUS SONG FIC!

This was very interesting I must say, you conveyed their emotions very well, and the situation was very easy to imagine, very well done, keep up the good work!!

I think the moment captured was beauiful!! I really don't have anything that I think you should fix. I really like how you write!!

Very interesting piece and though I usually prefer more details, I think you did a good job of capturing the moment between them.  Keep up the good work :).