Oh dear....god. I'm still trying to get my stomach to heal from laughing so hard. Both chapters were so funnny. El Diablo indeed *gigglesnort* and the flying gerbil giving Inuyasha a hard time was just too hilarious. Please continue this drabble series and I can always give you ideas if you need some randomness- just PM me ^^
Haha! :D that was really cute. Great job for your first one! one tip is to try not to use I and you too often, you isn't such a bad one but when it's written in third person I's get a little confusing. But overall it really good, very cute, and you have good grammar. Hopefully you'll make this into a chapter story? or series of comidic oneshot? *hint hint beg beg* :}
Loved it! MontiK
