Im guessing Kagme and Sesshomaru were listening to Kik and inu talking about kiling kagome.

 

cool i like it please leave more

I thought Inuyasha was going to end up pinned to the god tree, when she screamed that she wished she had never freed him! (She did have the jewel in her possession when she said it.) Wonder what kind of betrayal Inuyasha has up his sleeve now? He's had all that time to be with Kikyo, maybe he has come to realize that she's not a nice person, after all. Or maybe, he is totally under her control. That's the fun thing about the first few chapters of a new story, there are so many possibilities. I can't wait to see where you go from here. And, also, your writing isn't bad without a beta. It will be great if you get one, but if not, just go for it. As a reader, I don't expect perfect grammar or spelling, just an entertaining story. So keep up the good work!

i like the story so far please update soon

Ok I like what your doing but I do think you need to add to this chapter. You should break it in to two chapter one being her at home and growing over the two years - because she jsut pops up powerful- shes yet to have any character growth. I think chapter 2 should be periods of time with in that 2 years where she has grown and explain why shes going beck and chapter 3 should be her return to edo......Does that make sence? I just found the jump over such a long period of time choppy.....Other than that I think your doing a good job and can't wait to see what happens next!

I hope you can continue, because I look forward to reading more!

I would definetly love to read more of this great story!

u should continue with this story i want to know whats going to happen next