| I just noticed that a while ago and fixed it but I might redo the story someday once I'm a better writer.    
 | Rofl instead of "Balcony window" you said "Baloney window." lmao I almost peed myself laughing. But, other than that funny mixup...its pretty interesting xD just be careful of mistakes (no matter how funny)    
 
katlady (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Apr 2009 | its  good  so  far but  you  might  want  to remove the  code    
 
Rj (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2009 | i hope you make kagome the master and sesshomaru the slave =)    
 
Rj (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2009 |  |  |  |