Nicely done. Do you have any plans to continue with this story? If not that is too bad, it would have been interesting to see what would have happened. But I hope that you keep writing, you have real talent for it.
Anggie (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Mar 2009
| I wasn't expecting the second late....very clever.
well, that is a good reason, huh ? =D
loved the story, the line "slicing the mushrooms just how she like them [ okay, so he did enjoy that - he loved cutting things up " is absolutely hilarious ^_^
| ok, I guess he'll forgive her now! JEN
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Mar 2009
Too Funny! HA Sesshoumaru goes from angry to speechless I love it! At least she had a good reason! Great challenge fic! Karma for you!
Nice short story. Very well-written. Loved the line about cutting things up. Could it be the first chapter of a multi-chapter fic, though? I'm sorry. I can never resist begging for more.
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