I CANT BELIEVE YOU JUST ENDED IT RIGHT THERE!!! YOU CRUEL CRUEL PERSON!!!

Well, I was definitely not expecting that ending.

WONDERFUL PLOT ,GORGEOUS BUILD UP,TOUCHDOWN.

MORE UPDATES NEEDED TO EXPLAIN THE PLOT.I WOULD LIKE TO SEE WHERE THE PLOT GOES.

Hahah loved it!

I loved it!!! Sesshomaru turned up to be a jerk, or probably he had good reasons to do what he did. So what happened to the baby? Did she lose it in the accident? No one ever told her that she had been pregnant? She asked her mother if she ever had sex, why didn't she tell her then? So many questions! So, how is Sesshomaru going to win her back? Perhaps she has more things to remember, like how he made her feel and how she felt. Has she recovered all her memories?

Oh MissMac you very much need to continue, I will not send hate mail or any form of pitchfork fire and brim stone but I will request you please continue. Your work is tantilizing at the very least and memserizing (for lack of a better word) at the most. You paint lovely pictures with your story, without using much discription it is a beautiful ability you have and it would be a shame to not give us more. So please continue, well construed and a very very lovely plot too. :)

Please do. You can't end it there...well, you can, but....please?

Wow. After all that I'm not gunna lie...I am pretty damn depressed that she said THAT name out of every name she could've said. Damn shame...

lmao! brilliant!

Oh man.  That was *not* the name I was expecting. (I thought it would be Inuyasha) ^_^

Fuck...hahahah thats all i could think of when she said Naraku..Oh fuck haha i loved this it was beatfully written good job

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BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

I sincerely hope that was supposed to be comedic, because there has never been a more believable opportunity for Sesshoumaru to faceplant. Yowza, Kags! Oh SNAP, indeed!!!!! LOLOLOL!!!!

Your style is engaging, but as a friendly crit there could be some sharpening of word choice and flow, cutting down on repetition. Also, there's a bit of discrepancy with the plot: if Kagome can't remember the past 5 years, why is her mother bringing up the Sengoku Jidai? Wouldn't Kagome, having no memory of it, think her mom is a little bat-shit crazy? It may be better suited to have her mother hint at a strange past, but drop the subject when Kagome doesn't take the bait, so to speak. Perhaps include her remembering the word "Tetsusaiga" but be unclear where it comes from. It's just a little jarring that she can't remember anything and yet the idea of traveling back in time doesn't startle her.

I really liked her interaction with Sesshoumaru, though, and I found it interesting how you left the cause of her injuries up in the air. I was really attracted to their chemistry, and never expected the end!! It really smacked me upside the face, but it also makes me wonder, was Kagome gettin' a little sumthin' sumthin' from Naraku on the side??

OH SNAP!

Brilliant twist at the end.  I sincerely hope you continue this one to include Sess's reaction to her faux pas.

LOL.. Great read btw

kept lolling as i read...

after the heat filled moments...

enter Naraku.. WTF?!

LOL