LOVE Your story as usual ^__________^ One thing I noticed that you might want to fix was....
"There was no snow at all...The ground was covered with snow and pebbles with designs..." ~ How can the ground be covered in snow if it "there is no snow"?
And....that's it...because I got too absorbed into the story again =P
Oh my god, HOW do you do this ??? You keep me in the edge of my seat during each and every chapter ! I can't help but love every line you write, it's all so perfectly... perfect! =P
And yes, it was romantic =) I loved the 'filling the void on the right' part, I'd never thought of it like that =)
I'm really getting addicted here, I hope you update soon!!
I can't wait until you update!!!!
Is Sesshoumaru going to find out Fuji is Kagome? Is Ume-san the one who stole the jewel shards? Or is she possessed?
I have so many questions!!!!
Please, please update soon!!!
Yaaaaah! You evil evil... evil! lol. Telling us you won't update as often and leaving us there!
That was mean ;)
This story is addictive, really. I hope Sess is not going to misunderstand her, she didn't know the Shikon was there in the first place... I hope he won't think she was planning this from the start...
Take your time hon, but I still look forward to the next chapter! -SQUEEEE-
Dewa mata
Man...you just keep giving us cliffies. You're so evil. I hope you'll update soon.
Thank goodness Kagome finally lightened up or her visit with Sesshoumaru was going to be miserable for them both. He appears to be absolutely smitten and he is so romantic. He has gone to so much effort to not only see her again but make the trip to his palace enchanting.
It makes sense for Sesshoumaru to be keeping the jewel safe. He is the most powerful demon. I wonder if the jewel's call will make her priestess abilities kick into high gear, therefore detectable to Sesshoumaru's senses.
Oooo you left it at the worst possible spot since you wont be updating as much!!! Yay for more as soon as you can! :)
I've neglected reviewing before, which makes me a very, very bad person. D: But I'm here now, so I hope that makes up for being a silent reader. Anyway - turning on the suspense this chapter? :) I'm definitely not complaining, always love a mystery to puzzle out, and it just makes me more eager for the next update! ^^ Your writing style is lovely - exactly the right balance of description and dialogue, and you portray Kagome's indecision and burgeoning (or should that be 'already burgeoned'? :P) feelings for Sesshoumaru in a very realistic way.
In short, another brilliant chapter for a brilliant story, and you've hooked me as a reader (and reviewer, to pay penance for my laziness x.x) for the duration of this fic. And definitely afterwards, too. ^^ *cheers you on* Well done, MissTeak!
Ooo dun dun dun....If Kagome thought it was hard to keep her secret already, being around the jewel won't help matters any! Sesshoumaru is being so sweet! It makes me melt *swoons* You did a wonderful job of describing the scenerey, and I'm sad to see that they writing streak has to be slowed down for a while. But I'll be waiting patiently!
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