You know i passed by this a few times and decided to read it right now. i liked it very much. Your idea is very interesting and i like your characters interaction. I think you did very well. There are a few grammar and spelling errors but nothing big and can easily be fixed by a read through or a beta. I really want to know what happens! So keep writing and ill keep reading!

Can't wait for the next chapters!

awwwwwwww its so cute i love it please continue it. and i love how you make kagome seem as if she is still a small child. it is very good. ^-^

So far, so good!  Looking forward to Chapter 3.

I personally am voting for Mukoutsu.  He was very stifling and always talking about taking Kagome but never worked up the courage to actually do so.  It'll be interesting to see who you envision!

-TK