Like it so far, but the story moved very fast in places, and, since I'm not really up on as much Japanese mythology as I'd like, I got lost a few times. You might want to go into a bit more background when you name characters.

I really enjoy the way that you type.  And how in most parts the words flow smoothly.  I see some errors probably due to, typing to fast.  <br>

The story seems to be off to a great start, and I would love to see the spectacular finish, that I think this story can make. <br>

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-FangedBeasty