Hi there.

I know thus review is years after the fact bit I just wanted you to know that I love this story and I think your lemon-writing is very good, much better than many writers'. I do wish you would expand the take with a Part 3 or epilogue, just so we'd know what happened to Sesshomaru and Kagome after their night together. Does he get his lands back? Does Kag manage to rebuff her suitors? Will they meet again? And most importantly, will Sesshomaru finally understand Kagome is his one and only?

Here's hoping you still get notifications and that you're still inspired. Thanks for sharing your talent.

oh why did this have to end?  what happen next is all I can say....wow what a lemon.

How can you think that sucks? It was great~ Please continue the story? I really like it and wanna see what's going to happen.

Thankyou, and please update soon *puppy dog eyes*

I really enjoyed this story and thought that the lemon was well written...I do not see a reason for you to have someone else write the lemons for you at all......btw.....I really would love to see you turn this into a full blown story.....this is an excellent plot and just begs to be continued.

Just to let you know, this is far from sucking, and I believe you should make this into a story.  It was great and I would love for you to continue to write this.  This is so original compared to many other stories I have read.

You've got to be kidding me! Give up writing lemons?!! I don't think so! I've heard that writers are not always satisfied with their efforts but most of the time, readers don't have those qualms. I definitely appreciate your work.

So i understand that you wanted to practice a one shot i myself have started many attempts at them, they're not easy and i tell you yours was good, wonderful even, BUT i'm gunna need you to continue this story. you've opened up too much possibility to what could happen and what will and i really want to know if Sess got his lands back, what the other Tai did, as well as Inuyasha's and Kouga's reaction to all of this, how the loss of her virginity effects her powers, not to mention time itself and how it plays a role on her as the shikon. So it didnt effect her aura but is she still pure enough for the jewel? I WANT ANSWERS AND MORE CHAPTERS ::r0o is being a bossy reviwer!!!!:: anyway I will honestly respect if you do not wish to continue this story but i thik you could have a fantastic tale to tell here.

basically, What happens next? I'll be watching. cant wait! - r0o

Everyone else is right. Not only does this NOT suck, but the plot is actually fabulous. It's original, it's fresh, and I really REALLY hope you will actually continue on the story. I really enjoyed the characterizations, and I was completely intrigued by the plot to the point that the 'end' has left me hanging! Please continue on, and please feel confident that you have the ability to write a well done lemon!

This does not suck. You've included so much more than what was needed for a PWP. The story lead-up makes the lemon that much sweeter. Stick with your instincts; they haven't failed you thus far.

Thank you for sharing,

Kyuthe

You should really make this a full length story. I will be one kick ass story if you did. It's a new situation that has never been used and it has all the ability to be great. Please turn it into a full length story. I will be forever happy if you did.

~*|Angel From Below|~*~|Demon From Above|*~

Oh how I wish you would continue this! I understand its just a one-shot but it's so good, I want more!