This was a nice story and I am happy to have read it. I've read other stories too from you.
Only thing I'm confused about is that there has been some plot holes. For example, Sesshomaru (Future) gave Kagome something. But it was never brought up again.
Kagome also kept mentioning things that we had just read. Kind of like a flashback of a scene I just saw. It messed with the flow of the story.
If Kagome changed the past, then future Sesshomaru shouldn't have any memory of had happened before Kagome changed it. Because it never did happen. But time traveling is confusing.
I enjoyed the love story it was very sweet and I'm glad to have read it. Thank you so much
You do realize there are three empty chapters, besides the authors note at the top, right? Is there a way to fix that?
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