Reviews for The Donor by thetroll

Kathy (Chapter 31) - Sun 11 Feb 2024

6 months... Thought it had been longer. That's not enough time for anything 


L-desu (Chapter 31) - Sun 11 Feb 2024

Ah, i got heart flutters when Inuyasha mentioned pack. Looking forward to the next installment!


Jennifer (Chapter 30) - Sat 03 Feb 2024

Update soon!!!


Kshadeslady (Chapter 25) - Sat 06 Jan 2024

Leave it to Inuyasha to totally muck things up. 


Kshadeslady (Chapter 22) - Sat 06 Jan 2024

That is so sweet. I felt so bad for them. Are her miko powers an issue here? He's going overboard in a very Inu way. 


Kshadeslady (Chapter 10) - Sat 06 Jan 2024

Mama Inu coming around to check oot Kagome and got a little extra in bargain. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 30) - Fri 05 Jan 2024

wonderful chapter i LOVED it..


Kathy (Chapter 30) - Wed 03 Jan 2024

How is it that the non drunk person remembers everything and the drunk one doesn't. 

Great chapter 


Kathy (Chapter 29) - Thu 14 Dec 2023

Awws. Cute chapter 


L-desu (Chapter 28) - Tue 05 Dec 2023

I am so happy to have found your fics! Loving The Donor immensely!


Kathy (Chapter 28) - Sun 03 Dec 2023

Glad I found your newly uploaded stories. I've read from you before and have enjoyed it. I do feel some parts of the story is missing. For example, I didn't know Kagome knew Rin was Sesshomaru's adopted daughter. The reader found that out through a memory but no indication that Sesshomaru has mentioned it. 

 

Also, the things Kagome refuses to ask like "what kind of Youkai are you?" Seems so off since she's going to have a kid with this guy. 

 

The mood of some of the conversations seem weird. Like when Kagome and Sesshomaru were getting upset with each other at the cafe, nothing that was being said gave an indication that any of them should have been angry, so it didn't feel like it flowed. 

 

I very much enjoyed the story and will love to continue reading. Thank you so much 


zodiak023 (Chapter 28) - Fri 01 Dec 2023

OMG!!! yay!!! loved...absolutely loved this story! I cant wait to see what happens next! i hope they decide to go with the natural way of things than what they are trying to do with the IFV. hmmm this is such a great story! please update asap! 


Midnight Song (Chapter 28) - Thu 30 Nov 2023

Excellent writing. Kagome is a little more polite than I imagined, but it's a nice change of pace from the stories where she's especially crass and unaware of boundaries--and more fitting for the older age you have her as here. It's been a while since I was willing to try a new story from an unfamiliar author, but your plot is also very unique. I've been reading sess/kags for almost twenty years now and it's very refreshing to see a different play on ideas. Really great work and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm all for the slow burn build up but I also hope they finally get their feelings out in the air now. :))


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