Yay! So happy to see an update on this story! I really love the vulnerability in Sesshomaru and him trying to figure this all out since the world, life, and relationships are literally so new to him. But I wish Kagome could see how this affects him and make an effort towards a relationship, at least the basis of friendship and like. Because its completely not fair to have someone brought into existence for you, to just abandon them mentally and emotionally.
Oh man I was thinking of the headway they both were making in the getting to know one another however, Kagome needs to lighten up and start talking to Sesshomaru so both can be asking twenty questions while taking a stroll through the park or going to a museum... Anyways, I was not surprised Toga knew Sesshomaru was a Made to Order partner. His talk with Toga hopefully helps him and Kagome in the future.
When can u update this I love this story and u haven't updated ?!?! Crying
That was beautiful
ROFL Oh my gosh I can practically see her almost fall or choke on her food when he said that! Way to go writer! Thank you. Your story is very refreshing.
Oh shit indeed! lol oh my gosh. I love how you created this story! Will love to see how this goes ^-^ Many thanks!
What is up with her relationship with Kikyo? He is trying so hard to make her happy and it seems that he has found a way. Great update! Thank you.
She's such a tease lmao
Oh man poor Sesshomaru, second guessing never works. Oh the mother was awesome happy and excited for Kagome. But if she doesn't know about the feelings Kagome has about Kikyo makes me believe the mother is nieve when it comes to Kagome's feelings and knowings on certain people in her life. Wonder what happened to cause the rift. Anyways, at least Izayoi's words helped Sesshomaru start the romance. Wonder what he will think when he was based off Kagome's books and that his discription had found its way onto her application.... That is a question to ask later hopefully something they both can get past.
Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Nov 2022
Pienso que Kikyo le robó a Kag alguno ( o varios ) novios y por eso tiene miedo de que conozca a Sess.
Y aunque no parece que Sess se vaya ha estar ffijando en otras mujeres puede queKikyo quiera aprovecharse de su parecido con Kagome.
neelixo (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Nov 2022
Illegal cliffhanger! I feel bad for Sesshoumaru. He's trying as hard as he can. The situation is definitely difficult. Being in the position of knowing someone doesn't want you, even if it's an assumption, is so painful.
Mari (Chapter 4) - Fri 04 Nov 2022
Such a wonderful concept. Beautifully written! I loved how you weaved Inuyasha and Toga into the story. Can't wait for more updates! ^_^
Jessie (Chapter 4) - Fri 07 Oct 2022
Omg lol what a way to find out you're daughters married this story is awesome hope you continue it
Jessie (Chapter 3) - Fri 07 Oct 2022
Aww I love his character and how helpful he is I hope you continue this story I love it
Tecolote (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Sep 2022
So Sesshomaru got himself a job so soon? His confidence really speaks for itself. And I think it suits him, being a chef. Better than an office job would ever be.
I really like the small interactions between the newlyweds, they are open and interested and attracted but Kagome is pretty shy. I can understand it. But Sesshomaru is in the best hands possible, Kagome will take very good care of his heart.
It's very sweet how Sesshomaru just arrived and is driven to take care of his wife in every way possible. I can see how this program helps so much, not only do they introduce an adult to the country's workforce but they come high wired to reproduce fast. I would worry about the morality of all this but I guess if they're programmed to like this and they're happy it's okay.
I didn't expect her not to tell her family about getting married with the program at all though, kind of important to mention in many ways.
Tecolote (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Sep 2022
This is perfect, Sesshomaru being so instinct driven is amazing and I bet even the cientists didn't know that adding the already placed urge to procreate with beast characteristics would make one hell of a sex demon.
Tecolote (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Sep 2022
I can't stop grinning, I'm in love with this concept. O can't wait to read more.
Lauren (Chapter 4) - Sat 10 Sep 2022
That's so cute, Sesshomaru being a chef at their parents' restaurant. And he was off to a good start before Kagome's mother got there.
Oh yeah, I'm gonna need more of this story because it is just perfection!
I am loving the way you are bringing the characters together in this dystopia you have created.
Are the people of Japan aware of youkai and are they living amongst them or is Sesshomaru going to be just an anomaly?
Will K/S's children have his looks and abilities also?
I can only the imagine the look of surprise on her mothers face. Why would Kagome not tell her mother how she was getting a husband?
I am so looking forward to future updates...keep up the great work.
Cheers :)
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