DeadlyGlacier (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Dec 2021



First of all, this was brilliant.  I loved how Inukimi was the one to turn Sess into a puppy as a test--it makes so much sense!

Secondly, two lines from this fic made my jaw drop:

“You will always be my son but with this attitude you will never be my lord.” -- this is just a wonderful look into Inukimi's character.  She's tough but fair, and you've highlighted that so well in the beginning, but especially with this line.

“You will not need this useless attire anymore.” He explained simply. “You will be wearing my scent tonight.” -- WHEN I TELL YOU I GASPED AT THIS LINE.  OMG.  I'm kicking myself for not thinking of it myself (lol), but more than that, I am so proud of you.  I remember earlier this year when we first met you said something about not writing because English wasn't your first language and you were self-conscious--but now here you are, several stories under your belt with more to come!  Well done, my friend, well done.








Sensual, sweet, and passionate--I could gobble that up all day.  You got me fanning myself over here, and it's cold af in my house, lmao.

All in all, I loved this story, and I'm so excited to see what else you come out with, my friend.

Keep writing.


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