Reviews for Betrayal by LibraCourt

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docsgirl4 (Chapter 20) - Sat 24 Aug 2024

My mind keeps playing X is gonna give it to em over in my head now. 


docsgirl4 (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 Aug 2024

All I could do was cheer Shippo on as he told Rin about what she had done. I really liked this chapter


REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

I had to go back and reread who Abi was(hehehe, I guess I forgot about that little trouble maker)! Not sure really what Sesshoumaru's alter ego can do about these children but I say good luck with that. Kagome is just in a word of hurt right now, and oh heck what will he do if she misscarrys??Well you left us at a nail biting place.  Thanks for the update!


REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

I had to go back and reread who Abi was(hehehe, I guess I forgot about that little trouble maker)! Not sure really what Sesshoumaru's alter ego can do about these children but I say good luck with that. Kagome is just in a word of hurt right now, and oh heck what will he do if she misscarrys??Well you left us at a nail biting place.  Thanks for the update!


Rayen (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

I was like "Abi......????". Lol. Great job at misdirection. I can't wait for the beast to dole out punishment to Rin and Sesshomaru.


Elementalkitsuneangel (Chapter 20) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

Man i forgot who abi was.  Hehe Rin's old bully was working with Rin's "friends". Wonder what she'll think about that.  Poor primal sess, he didn't deserve this.  Can't believe sesshoumaru would be this stupid, i hope they just find a way to separate them so primal sess can be with kagome and regular sess can go and regret by himself and watch as his beast has the happiness that he could have had.


HeathenMikoVixen69 (Chapter 19) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

I absolutely love your story and I've been constantly checking back for updates!! Thank you for another chapter!! 


HeathenMikoVixen69 (Chapter 19) - Thu 22 Aug 2024

I absolutely love your story and I've been constantly checking back for updates!! Thank you for another chapter!! 


docsgirl4 (Chapter 18) - Sat 10 Aug 2024

Awesome chapter. I'm so glad Sesshomaru's Beast was able to comfort Kagome...in more ways than one...I also like getting insight on what was going on at Shippo's house.  I can't wait to see what tricks he has up his sleeve. I'm sure we will find out what Sesshomaru's Beast plans to leave Kagome. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you


Jennifer (Chapter 18) - Thu 08 Aug 2024

Update soon!!!! Rin and Crew will get what they deserve real soon! And Kagome deserves so much better!


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Wed 31 Jul 2024

I thought it when it was originally decided and even more so now, I don't get this three month deal. And definitely not telling Rin about it. It just gives her a timeline of how long she has to completely destroy their relationship beyond repair before she has to confess to save her skin. It just feels like Kagome wanted to give up this relationship because otherwise she'd have made an immediate ultimatum before Rin had a chance to give Sesshomaru's "rational " side more reason to doubt her faithfulness. Confess and stop now or die. And why are they not looking for ways to prove what Rin and these girls are up too? There are ways to track what she's doing on the computer. As rich and well connected as he is he could hire an expert to track all of them and get proof, these girls arent tech prodigies that would be untraceable. Instead they are just letting it happen. This strange maneuvering around him that his beast, her, and his father are doing is just damage control not a solution. It seems more like it was already decided they were done and the purpose of the three months was Kagome and his beast giving themselves an excuse to have a few more months together before they broke up.

 

I'm at a loss as to why Sesshomaru so completely refuses to accept the truth. Everyone else believes Kagome and Rin has changed pretty drastically. I can understand why he wouldn't want to believe Rin would turn on him like this, but still. Kagome had never given him reason to disbelieve her, had gone above and beyond for Rin before all of this, and Rin is a teenager with major early childhood trauma. She's had him all to herself for years and is now being faced with him having a mate and future biological children which as a youkai would take precedence over her. It's logical that she is truly causing problems. He even told Kagome back in chapter 5 that his primal side rarely makes mistakes but now won't listen to it or anyone he trusts/respects. What's his deal?

 

I really love this story, I just don't get the three month thing and why they are just resigning themselves to it ending instead of being proactive about dealing with Rin. It's not saving Rin, just putting off her execution and it's not saving their relationship just putting off the expiration date. That said, I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Kagome going to wise up that hes trying to get her pregnant? What is Shippo going to do to Rin? I also want to know what her little cronies' real motivation is for pushing this. Just spoiled mean girl schemes or something beyond that? 


Anonymous (Chapter 18) - Wed 31 Jul 2024

I thought it when it was originally decided and even more so now, I don't get this three month deal. And definitely not telling Rin about it. It just gives her a timeline of how long she has to completely destroy their relationship beyond repair before she has to confess to save her skin. It just feels like Kagome wanted to give up this relationship because otherwise she'd have made an immediate ultimatum before Rin had a chance to give Sesshomaru's "rational " side more reason to doubt her faithfulness. Confess and stop now or die. And why are they not looking for ways to prove what Rin and these girls are up too? There are ways to track what she's doing on the computer. As rich and well connected as he is he could hire an expert to track all of them and get proof, these girls arent tech prodigies that would be untraceable. Instead they are just letting it happen. This strange maneuvering around him that his beast, her, and his father are doing is just damage control not a solution. It seems more like it was already decided they were done and the purpose of the three months was Kagome and his beast giving themselves an excuse to have a few more months together before they broke up.

 

I'm at a loss as to why Sesshomaru so completely refuses to accept the truth. Everyone else believes Kagome and Rin has changed pretty drastically. I can understand why he wouldn't want to believe Rin would turn on him like this, but still. Kagome had never given him reason to disbelieve her, had gone above and beyond for Rin before all of this, and Rin is a teenager with major early childhood trauma. She's had him all to herself for years and is now being faced with him having a mate and future biological children which as a youkai would take precedence over her. It's logical that she is truly causing problems. He even told Kagome back in chapter 5 that his primal side rarely makes mistakes but now won't listen to it or anyone he trusts/respects. What's his deal?

 

I really love this story, I just don't get the three month thing and why they are just resigning themselves to it ending instead of being proactive about dealing with Rin. It's not saving Rin, just putting off her execution and it's not saving their relationship just putting off the expiration date. That said, I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Kagome going to wise up that hes trying to get her pregnant? What is Shippo going to do to Rin? I also want to know what her little cronies' real motivation is for pushing this. Just spoiled mean girl schemes or something beyond that? 


Nat (Chapter 18) - Sun 28 Jul 2024

Awesome story can't wait to see what happens next!


SmilingFool (Chapter 18) - Sun 21 Jul 2024

Oh thank you, I so loved this chapter and the fact Beast got Kagome pregnant....  LOL  Everything the Beast said is true and I can't wait until Kagome has the pup.   


cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Jul 2024

Espero que se de cuenta a tiempo de lo mala que está siendo Rin ,ya se está pasando de la raya metiendo a tercerosespero se lleve un buen castigo y las otras tambien actualiza pronto está muy interesante


REDWOLF (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Jul 2024

This was great! Can't believe how ignorant Sesshoumaru is. Maybe his beast should stick around. Can't wait for the next update!


REDWOLF (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Jul 2024

This was great! Can't believe how ignorant Sesshoumaru is. Maybe his beast should stick around. Can't wait for the next update!


valeria aguirre (Chapter 18) - Sat 20 Jul 2024

deberias tambien subir todos los capitulos a Ao3 sigo la hisotira pero no puedo hacer una cuenta en dokuga ya e probado de todo pero e fallado pliss subela a Ao3 para que me llegue las notificaciones por correo 


REDWOLF (Chapter 17) - Sat 20 Jul 2024

I was so hoping for chapter 18.  Sometimes this site has issues.  I hope you get it working for you.


cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 17) - Fri 19 Jul 2024

Que pasa como puesto el mismo capitulo


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