Such an interesting story, keep.up the great work.
So did Sesshomaru cheat on her or was that just a nightmare? I'm guessing he went back to his ex who's now pregnant and he's moved her into his and Kagom's house since she was at the house and using the guest room when Kagome was putting Rin to bed?? Is Sess in the bedroom with Kagura since he an Kag have been in separate bedrooms??
Why was Kagome even still living there at that point if Sess cheated and brought the woman into her home???? Wth. I see Kagome has issues but ...
I want to understand but I'm not sure what's going on. I need some exposition at least to understand the characters actions. I know the author knows but I'm just not getting it and I really want to get it.
This chapter helped though. It gave me pieces to work wit. <3
Poor Kagome - so much unresolved pain still echoing through her life
Mele (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Apr 2021
Omg I am so into this story! It would be awesome to get a chapter in Sesshomaru's pov...even him visiting her motner and brother and learning of Kagome's falling out with her family and friends.
Oh hot damn, I was right Bankotsu is a sniffer.... Dang the PI played it off well, that he cared but messed up when he said she was married to the father.... Alarm bells anyone? I would have hoped Kagome learn of who the guy was instead of meeting up with him or change where to meet. Oh well, we'll find out what happens next time.
Hey you do need to fill us in on Kagome's nightmare, why Sesshomaru did what he did and who the other woman is? Most likely the other woman is Kagura. Couldn't picture Yura pregnant and who the hell is harming Rin....
I would like to know the real reason Kagome left besides the snipit from her nightmare or the piece shared between Inu Yasha and Kagome. Need to know more information before he tries/does take her back and who is harming Rin and why can't she tell Sesshomaru? Got to say losing Rin like that, only to find Rin the hands of an unknown man walking away instead of trying to find her mother/guardian. At first I thought he was a child taker but then realized something. This guy knew who he was looking for and found them. Sesshomaru sent a sniffer (PI) to look for Kagome and Rin. He knows Kagome is with Inu Yasha just not where exactly. Now this guy is playing lets have coffee be my friend... So sad Kagome's an idiot but hey if not for her the story would be dull.
Bree (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Apr 2021
That surprise me.
Ovela (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Mar 2021
I'M a bit confused what's going on. He tells her he doesn't want her and leaves her for another, but then wants her back in the next chapter? I don't understand.
Besides, it doesn't matter what happened to make Sess turn on Kags. There may still be love, but there's no trust if he went behind her back like that. Not to mention how he disclosed his new relationship. Just cruel.
i'm curious as to what happened to them. its off to a great start. i'm glad Inuyasha is a friend and helper to Kagome and Rin. the fact that Kags is pregnant may help in the end. i'm wondering who the woman is that made this mess in the first place. if she was the one to hurt Rin?; the one to make Sesshoumaru act the way he is right now?; why Kags had to take Rin and leave in the first place?. i just hope the love she has for her husband doesn't over ride her common sense. looking forward to the rest of this fan fiction. c'ya'
Bree (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Mar 2021
I enjoy the first chapter. I will read more to see if my guess, about the other women and who is hurting Rin, is correct. I am wondering what Sesshourmaru is thinking. Is it I am glad to get rid of them, I own them and they need to behave, or if he misses them.
Interesting. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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