Super good. Excited for more. 
| interesting story with a good start!  i like the way you are having Sesshoumaru interact with her - unapologetically curious.  i love when he just waltzes up like 'i'm bored, you're interesting.  you will answer my questions until i'm bored again, and if that means i have to follow you around, so be it.'    
       
 
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