Hi love the story so far and can't wait to read what happens next... I hope you update soon....
Noooo.... forgive, but don't forget. If he ran to another for this problem, he would run again when another problem comes up. Please don't let her take him back. Their laws may favor the father generally, but they live in a modern age and would be setting a bad precedent… Or at least that's all you could look at it.
I really hope you write both endings. Can't wait to see what happens next.
emma (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 Jan 2021
Oooh, it's getting good now and the cat is well and truly out of the bag. I can't wait to find out how Sesshoumaru reacts when he finds out Kagome has left!
Mecca (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jan 2021
Ack. It's so good. On one hand, I'm a sucker for angst and at times, sad endings, so what ever your muse gives you, let it fly. Although I know it would be sad and Sess and Kagome dont end up together, I just hope Kagome finds love and Sess and Sango end up in the shitter so to speak lol because I'm just that spiteful ;)
I am loving this story. What about writing both endings? Go with the one your muse wants first (really peaked my interest) then write the alternative so we can leave your story with a smile. I normally don't like the sad endings, but he's really going to deserve to lose it all for what he did.
Can't wait to see what you do.
I'm always a sucker for a happily ever after ending so my fingers are being crossed for that, but whatever path your must decides to take it, I look forward to reading more!
Mele (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Dec 2020
Please update soon. I need to know what happens next
emma (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Dec 2020
I'm hooked on this one. Please, please, please tell me that isn't it, I need to know how it ends!
Mecca (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Dec 2020
Oh my gah, my heart just broke for her T_T I kinda see this as a way for Kagome to stand on her own, and make Sesshoumaru feel like a complete ass for cheating on her, what in the ever loving hell was he thinking?? Ah he isn't perfect in this one. What if she ends up finding out she's pregnant !!! he finds out, doesn't find her for the longest time, she ends up falling in love with Bankotsu or whomever, Sesshoumaru wants her back, drama drama, he's sorry for cheating on her with Sango, she has a hard time letting go of Bankotsu, they have to figure out co-parenting while Sesshoumaru tries to win her back, etc. lol sorry, i just threw up some ideas for you ;) I'd love an update to this! Gonna check out your other stories!
Listen here lol I was mad as hell when I got To the bottom and there was nothing else there hahahaha y'all be getting me real good with this. I absolute my love it already.
So far, im super into it! Lol I hope you update soon!
Momoro (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Dec 2020
You've got me hooked!!! this story sounds beyond juicy!
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