Please update your story please 

Loving the story 

Update please

Is this really complete? It doesn't seem like an ending.

i loved it!! but its too short. i need more!!! please add to this story. i want so much to see how this ends with sess and kags. i want to see how she adapts to court life in sess's care. how his mother will react to seeing him with a miko/human mate. the envy of all when kagome shows up mated and pupped, from both males(b/c sess found a pwrful mate) and from the females(b/c kags was chosen by sesshoumaru). i was surprised to see how calm inuyasha was when he found out his half brother took and mated kagome. i want to see if kags has one pup, two(twins), or three(triplets~2 boys and 1 girl). of course, the lemons are worth reading as well. so, i hope you come back and add on to this fiction. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Gah! What did Kagome hear when she was about to clean her foot? And Inuyasha took that a whole lot better than I anticipated. I kinda anticipated a bit of a hissy fit. Looks like the boy grew up!

I wonder what Kagome heard? Also why can't Inuyasha ever just trust that Kagome is a big girl and is just having the time of her life getting dicked down by a god!?

Hey you! Steamy read!  I love how this shows after care and that he very seriously took to seeing her needs met and how he adjusted his natural tendencies to her comfort. I think my favorite part was that it ended with us knowing they'd be snuggled up comfortably napping together in the sun. Such a lovely image! <3

oh My gosh such a great stories. Please continue add a couple more chapters I'd love to read about Kagome getting pregnant and what happens after the baby is born. 

A nap in the sun sounds fantastic

please come back and write some more. you can't end it like that!!!!!!

c'ya'

 I love the sex scenes. I just love a possessive Sesshomaru. I can't wait tI'll they have pups. 

Absolutely love this story, however, I have a small bit of correction to give you. 

The cervix does not dilate, nor can a penis of any shape push through it into the womb. It gets stopped by the cervix, which can feel slightly painful/pleasurable. But please STOP saying his penis pushes into her cervix. The female body does not, and cannot work that way. 

I know this is a slightly AU work and that's fine, but you're still working with a human female, and should remember human biology when writing the sex scenes.

Other than that, again, I think this is a great fic so far, and am loving the way you are having Kagome and Sesshomaru interact. 

Wow!!! Now I need to go sit on an iceberg I am so hot now lol!!! Bring on more please!!!

Really good. I enjoyed it 

Hot damn....

Wooooooooooow

omg  too bad it's a one shot