I really enjoyed reading your story! Your characters are engaging, and the plot unfolds in a way that kept me interested from beginning to end. I particularly appreciated how you captured their emotions and motivations—it felt very natural and compelling. Your dialogue flows smoothly, and your pacing struck a nice balance between introspection and action.
If I might offer one small suggestion: the description could be expanded a bit to give potential readers a clearer sense of the premise and tone. With a slightly richer synopsis, you might draw even more attention and set expectations just right.
My suggestiony:
In a quiet twist of fate, Kagome finds herself drawn to the enigmatic Lord Sesshomaru — a man whose silence speaks louder than words. As she learns to read the emotions behind his stoic demeanor, Kagome discovers that love isn’t always spoken — sometimes, it’s shown in the gentlest of actions.
Or very short:
The Silent Type — where words fall short, and love is written in quiet gestures.
Carlyn (Chapter 12) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
I don't know who commented that your story "wasn't particularly engaging," but I whole heartedly DISAGREE. Every chapter has had me excited to see what was next. I think you did an amazing job on this story! I hope to see more from you soon!
Carlyn (Chapter 15) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
OMG I LOVE IT!!!! Please come back and write more stories!
Carlyn (Chapter 14) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Damn it inuyasha!!! OMG talk about a buzz killer. Haha!
Carlyn (Chapter 12) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Awe! Yay Kagome! I was worried for a minute that she'd do something stupid given her insecurities. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 11) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
She's finally going to find out what the big bad Dai has in store for her! Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 8) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Can I just say... you are a WONDERFUL writer!?! You really are! I'm amazed you haven't posted more stories! I do hope you'll return and keep posting. It's so hard to find new, good story tellers these days. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 7) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Hahaha! OMG this is great
Carlyn (Chapter 6) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Haha! Cuuuute
Carlyn (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
I love the strong silent Sesshomaru type. So hot!
Carlyn (Chapter 2) - Thu 18 Mar 2021
Already loving the beautiful reprieve from the previous story I read. This is written beautifully and I'm very excited to see where this story goes.
Omg!!!!! Love the story! Thank you and keep up the good work! Very sinful, but delicious!!
So interesting to read how Sesshoumaru was trying to communicate in the body language of a dog demon and Kagome misinterpreting and not understanding. Great aspect to the story, enjoyed it all immensely, both quite in character. Thank you!
Nina (Chapter 16) - Sun 14 Jun 2020
I really loved this story :D
Kimmy (Chapter 16) - Wed 01 Apr 2020
Holy hello! Fans herself. Wow! Loved it!
WOW~~that's all i'm going to say. c'ya'
Uhhhhhmmmmm. This one sided smut did not work. I wasn't pulled in to read more stories like I was at first.
Tumny flips for this chapter.
Loved this. I am glad that Inuyasha and Kagome both found someone else to love.
Woah! You sure didn't disappoint with that ending! I confess when the read the second to last chapter, The End, I was bummed there was no full blown lemon, but the bonus chapter sure made up for it. Smokin' hot!! Of course, now that this over I'm going to miss finding your updates every few days. It's been an excellent fic, thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Also, while the description didn't originally grab my attention, I now couldn't see it described any other way. It's perfect.
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