Beautiful. Sweet and sad. 
| Heartbreaking. i like that you gave the sword the power to bring them back to a point where they have just died. That would have been too horrible. He really needed to let that out.     
 | I loved that! No yelling or outbursts, just honest contrite notes.     
 | Nicely done. seems they both needed that.     
 | Okay! I laughed out loud at that! Yep, hard to intimid the woman who taught you to tie on your underwear!     
 | Nice that he has an understanding and honest friend too.     
 | Wonderful that she has found someone to help her negotiate the ins and outs of demon society and customs. She needs a "mom" figure right now.     
 | LMBO! Perfect! I love when she can outdo him...just a little bit. And, yes, I did laugh out loud! Very nice.     
 | That was very nicely done. I don't think he forgot at all. He was just building up to it. Quite nicely too.     
 | Nothing like a little alcohol to help the nerves. You are writing this so darn sweetly. But it's perfect. He is a very honorable demon.     
 | OMG! I laughed out loud at that! That was just perfect!     
 | I love how his wry sense of humor is poking through. I think that these are some of my favorite bits in this story.     
 | 50 chapters in and I really love how this story is unfolding. Thank you for this wonderful gift.     
 | I think I just melted.     
 | Oh yes. That would be special.     
 | Too cute!     
 | But, he is making such an effort.     
 | Oh! I LOVED this chapter! So me, I win a lot at Trivial Pursuit because my brain "is a veritable garbage can of knowledge " (my words!). ????????    
 | Aw, that was sweet. I love a snarky sweet Sessh b    
 | Kagome is such a hot mess at times but I love her.     
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