| Well it seems the dummy went and done it. Kaoru couldn't keep his big mouth shut and had to get the last say in.  :( He needs to face some sort of consequence for his stupidity. Anyway, now the adventure begins.  Nice writing and well done. Can't wait for more chapters. Cheers!!!    
 
Nilee1 (Chapter 8) - Mon 12 Nov 2018 | OMG Who did that idiot release?    
 | How can you stop here TT__TT    
 | OMG, I'd beat the hell out of that girl... Disrespecting a shrine and its contents then calling Kagome baka-chan really I face plant her so why doesn't Kagome do something about it instead of being miss scaredy pants...  Please don't make Kagome out to be a weak person that totally sucks if that happened.  What the girl is going to read aloud the scroll and let the dragons free.  boy oh boy what a day... lol update soon    
 | Sorry about referencing Kaoru as 'she' instead of 'him'.  I wasn't sure of the gender until I read the summary again. And I didn't mean to imply that the entire class had manners unbecoming of young college adults...it just seems to be Kaoru.  LOL   :) Again, sorry about that.  :|    
 | Are these people suppose to be young college age adults?  :| Kaoru acts like a jealous trouble-making middle schooler.  She makes you want to knock her the hell out.  She has a very irksome attitude and personality but she makes a good antagonist to push the story along though. Interesting story and actually looking forward to more updates to see where you take this. Nice writing!    
 | This sounds fun already    
 | Ooh this is a good start! I can’t wait to see what happens :).    
       
 
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