This is a good story, however, if you don't mind me saying it feels kinda unfinished.  I was wondering if you planed to expand on what you have already?

Definitely more. Please!

Keep posting!

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What happens next!  Need update! 

I love the story and concept!  So please tell me your nor gonna stop! What halogens next!  Need update! 

You're not going to leave it there are you?!  I love the concept and really enjoyed reading the first few chapters.  Please update! xoxox

Update please!!!!

GREAT job I loved it keep up the great work and update sooon

The first and second chapter are quite well done, I hope that you put up the third chapter soon, or is the story really completed like it says on the status?