Reviews for What she deserves by Saya

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Guest (Chapter 43) - Tue 10 Oct 2017

I get it that you are writing about depression and how somebody from the outside views it and helps that person.

 

However, I find the majority of the characters OOC. I don't even recognize any of them.

 

It's almost become a cliche now in Sesshomaru/Kagome fanfiction for Inuyasha to bully, emotionally abuse and even physically abuse Kagome in order for Sesshomaru to end up with her. Sigh. Inuyasha was not a monster.

 

 


Sessygurl (Chapter 43) - Tue 10 Oct 2017

Wow. She should leave. Her powwrs are probably get repressed as well.


cassandra (Chapter 42) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

Ok, that would have been about the time I would've sat his butt like 10 times. I wonder why she didn't though?  He still has his beads don't he, or is she afraid of using them against him? I can't wait to see what happens next! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 42) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

Can someone slap or sit the idiot please, perhaps a boomerang to the head?


KShadeslady (Chapter 42) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

Okay, I’ve had about enough of him. Thanks so much for another wonderful update. You ROCK!


Cheyanna (Chapter 41) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

I love your story soo much! Its so intriguing and I am sad its so short but I sill like it anyway! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 41) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

Ugh! I wanna steal her and Shippo away!


Random (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

Hmm, almose sounds like she is seriously sick but does not tell anyone until it will be too late  :O
Wonder where this will end up. Hope to see more :)


KShadeslady (Chapter 41) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

My heart is breaking for her. When is she going to stand up to Yasha? I know she can do it. Thanks for the update. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 40) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

Sad. My heart breaks for her. Thanks so much for updating. 


ponpiri (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

These tiny snippets are killing me. U__U


cassandra (Chapter 40) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

I think maybe sesshomaru should step in and show them how a leader is supposed to act and how a pack should treat each other. He definitely could set their group straight! I can't wait to see what happens next! 


Drianax (Chapter 40) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

I love this fic!  Can't wait to see what disease Kagome has.  The one problem I have is each chapter is too short!  please update soon,


red bird (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

I love your story but I hate how short the chapters are... please! It's torture! 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 40) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

Poor Kagome, snap her out of it Sesshomaru!!!! Or better yet whisk her and Shippo away!


KShadeslady (Chapter 39) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

As usual...someone needs his bum kicked. Thanks so much for updating. Cheers!


LunaeriaDawn (Chapter 39) - Thu 05 Oct 2017

Q. Q I hate that inuyasha is calling kagome a whore.  He needs a swift kick in the nuts before they are nailed to a burning hut as he is given a really rusty knife....  I really hate inuyasha.... Sessh?maru is definitely better imo... Can't wait to read more! 


Sessygurl (Chapter 38) - Wed 04 Oct 2017

Uh oh I think a certain hanyou will be in trouble. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 38) - Wed 04 Oct 2017

Sorry, I didn’t get signed in. Great update! Somethings going to blow. 


Anonymous (Chapter 38) - Wed 04 Oct 2017

Oh boy...I’m thinking it’s about to hit the fan. 


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