I get it that you are writing about depression and how somebody from the outside views it and helps that person.
However, I find the majority of the characters OOC. I don't even recognize any of them.
It's almost become a cliche now in Sesshomaru/Kagome fanfiction for Inuyasha to bully, emotionally abuse and even physically abuse Kagome in order for Sesshomaru to end up with her. Sigh. Inuyasha was not a monster.
Wow. She should leave. Her powwrs are probably get repressed as well.
Ok, that would have been about the time I would've sat his butt like 10 times. I wonder why she didn't though? He still has his beads don't he, or is she afraid of using them against him? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Can someone slap or sit the idiot please, perhaps a boomerang to the head?
Okay, I’ve had about enough of him. Thanks so much for another wonderful update. You ROCK!
I love your story soo much! Its so intriguing and I am sad its so short but I sill like it anyway!
Ugh! I wanna steal her and Shippo away!
Random (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Oct 2017
Hmm, almose sounds like she is seriously sick but does not tell anyone until it will be too late :O Wonder where this will end up. Hope to see more :)
My heart is breaking for her. When is she going to stand up to Yasha? I know she can do it. Thanks for the update.
Sad. My heart breaks for her. Thanks so much for updating.
ponpiri (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Oct 2017
These tiny snippets are killing me. U__U
I think maybe sesshomaru should step in and show them how a leader is supposed to act and how a pack should treat each other. He definitely could set their group straight! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Drianax (Chapter 40) - Thu 05 Oct 2017
I love this fic! Can't wait to see what disease Kagome has. The one problem I have is each chapter is too short! please update soon,
red bird (Chapter 1) - Thu 05 Oct 2017
I love your story but I hate how short the chapters are... please! It's torture!
Poor Kagome, snap her out of it Sesshomaru!!!! Or better yet whisk her and Shippo away!
As usual...someone needs his bum kicked. Thanks so much for updating. Cheers!
Q. Q I hate that inuyasha is calling kagome a whore. He needs a swift kick in the nuts before they are nailed to a burning hut as he is given a really rusty knife.... I really hate inuyasha.... Sessh?maru is definitely better imo... Can't wait to read more!
Uh oh I think a certain hanyou will be in trouble.
Sorry, I didn’t get signed in. Great update! Somethings going to blow.
Anonymous (Chapter 38) - Wed 04 Oct 2017
Oh boy...I’m thinking it’s about to hit the fan.
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