Reviews for What she deserves by Saya

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Sarah (Chapter 81) - Sun 19 Jun 2022

Wow this is really good. I can't wait to read more.

raven (Chapter 81) - Sun 19 Jun 2022

This story is certainly gripping but I just can't see Sango or Miroku letting Inuyasha treat Kagome that way or not say anything and turn a blind eye. That just doesn't seem like them; they're very OOC in this. It's apaprent Kagome might've hurting herself and is depressed, but it's handled relatively decently. Nothing grotitus. Would've been nice to have a content warning for mental health, self harm, and disordered eating but maybe that's just me. The chapters are astoundingly short, even by Drabble standards, and it's kind of off-putting. With the amount you've given yourself for each chapter, there's very little information or story you can cram into the each chapter. While your writing is digestible and easy, it's hard to follow and things are left vague to the point of confusion. Like is Kagome not eating or just sad? Is she hurting herself or is that from Inuyasha? Regardless it's a pretty good story.

KShadeslady (Chapter 81) - Sun 19 Jun 2022

Thank you so much for updating this story. I went back to beginning and reread the entire story. I guess the whole truth will surface sooner or later. I hate to see them treating her like that. Especially Sango and Miroku. 

Kelly (Chapter 81) - Sat 18 Jun 2022

So glad to see more of this story!  I hope we are getting close to finding out what happened.

docsgirl4 (Chapter 77) - Thu 26 May 2022

Hmm...this is an interesting place in the story. What is Kagome going to do now? Also what will Sesshomaru do about Kagome's state.

Alexandria Biedron (Chapter 77) - Tue 22 Mar 2022

What on earth could have happened? They called her a whore. Sesshomaru should just let her stay with them 

Kelly (Chapter 77) - Mon 21 Mar 2022

Hmmm.  That one little statement from Sesshoumaru really sent my mind into overdrive.  I can't wait to find out what happened that caused Sango and Inuyasha to lose all respect for her.  And even though Miroku has tried to shield her from their contempt a little bit, it's obvious he looks at her differently, too.  So intriguing and gut-wrenching at the same time.  Thanks for the updates!

Osiris Mongua (Chapter 77) - Sun 20 Mar 2022

Oh, yay! You continued the story! Glad to know I'll be expecting updates ~

Drianax (Chapter 77) - Sat 19 Mar 2022

Update! Update! Update!  One question, why is she being blamed for "being abandoned by your (her) pack)?  Should the rest of the tachi be the guilty ones?

KShadeslady (Chapter 77) - Sat 19 Mar 2022

Thank you for the wonderful updates. Well, he is gently determined to get to the root of the matter. 

SmilingFool (Chapter 77) - Sat 19 Mar 2022

So what did Kagome do to make Sango and Inu Yasha hate her so?  Miroku remains passive and does nothing to help Kagome so what went wrong and when and with who?

KShadeslady (Chapter 73) - Fri 18 Mar 2022

Welcome back. Thank you for updating. Glad to see that Sesshomaru is standing up for her. 

Kelly (Chapter 73) - Thu 17 Mar 2022

So happy to see more of this story!  I had to go back to the beginning and read it all again.  Still wondering about all of the cryptic references to her ill health--they bring so many possibilities to mind.  I do hope Sesshoumaru will eventually say or do something to spark Miroku to do or say more to Sango and Inuyasha about their behavior toward Kagome.  I wish he would just take her away from the others.  Thanks so much for the update!  Can't wait for more!

Drianax (Chapter 73) - Wed 16 Mar 2022

You need to update ASAP!  I can't wait to find out why Kagome has been frozen out of the tachi.  The fact that they need to protect her seems to be such a common trope that I hope it's more complex.  Update soon, please!

ponpiri (Chapter 71) - Wed 27 May 2020

Usually I'm annoyed by stories like these with extremely short "chapters," but your pacing is attention-grabbing enough that I forget that the chapters are only a couple of sentences long.

Frog (Chapter 71) - Tue 26 May 2020

I would love to

Sarah (Chapter 71) - Tue 04 Feb 2020

Oh my. Poor kag. I look forward to reading more and seeing what happens. Thanks for sharing.

KShadeslady (Chapter 71) - Thu 30 Jan 2020

Those were all such beautiful chapters. I was starting to th she would never come up out of her despair. It's really nice to see her starting to turn around. I hope nothing happens to change that. Thanks for all the updates. You are really on a roll! 

Mecca (Chapter 69) - Thu 30 Jan 2020

At first, I thought Kagome might have cancer? But I'm really hoping not... I am hooked though! Please, may we have s'more?? ????

KShadeslady (Chapter 66) - Wed 29 Jan 2020

Finally...a little progress. Nice to see you back. 

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