| Not bad dear.  I rather enjoyed it.  I'm sorry that i wasn't able to get back to you earlier, didn't realize my phone needed to be charged.  Anyway, I really did enjoy this chapter.  You really did do a good job on it.  :)    
 
nicole (Chapter 3) - Fri 14 Jul 2017 | Where was kikyo to save inuyasha    
 
Haven (Chapter 4) - Fri 14 Jul 2017 | What about a darker fanfic with Sesshomaru and Kagome. I can suggest Monster by Skillet
 or if you don't wanna do a dark one, what about My life Would Suck Without You by Kelly Clarkson     
 
Toni (Chapter 2) - Mon 10 Jul 2017 | better than the first chapter   glad you kept it going   looking forward to more    
 
Mona (Chapter 2) - Sun 09 Jul 2017 | She seems really dense in this fic.    
 | Suggestion: Dangerous Mind by Within Temptation (I am pretty sure that's the song title.)   -Grins- I rather liked this one...    
 
Itoe (Chapter 1) - Sun 09 Jul 2017 | Hello :)   This is really a nice story. I really enjoyed it. And you know... I love Dark Sesshomaru Stories. Seeing as the Sesshomaru in your story is (somewhat) a dark one, I would have expected a bit more detailed lemon. Don't ask me why. :D    but I missed it here. I wouldn't mind another chapter. ^-^   Cheers    
 
Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 09 Jul 2017 | sorry that this is only a one shot  really enjoyed it    
       
 
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