A fantastic start to a story. It is definately rare to find a submissive Sesshomaru, and I sometimes wish it appeared more often. The one thing that I like to your story is the desire to be submissive, instead of being forced upon the person (which agitates me at times). A lot of stories have a strong Kagome that Sesshomaru forces (dominance, rape, etc) into being submissive, and it gets redundant. It is rare to find a story that has a sub-Sesshomaru with an actual desire (and acts upon that desire) to serve Kagome. Please continue the story, for I would like to see where it leads! :)
Viv (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Jun 2017
This is delicious. Please continue!
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