This was an interesting chapter. I have not reviewed since chapter five but I still have been keeping up with the story.
Now, some more Inu bashing...Kagome is being too tolerant of Inuyasha's behavior. I know it's her nature but enough is enough, she needs to step up to the plate and really kick his ass to the curb. Why is he pretending that he is in charge when he cares nothing for his pack. Kagome just needs to challenge him and take over but she won't do it. She lets him have his way while everyone else including herself are suffering. The pig steals and eats up most of the food, leaves his pack unprotected while he goes off to screw some dirt and comes back yelling; was it not a good enough lay. He makes me want to vomit...lol. This shows you are a good author if I get so worked up over a fanfiction character...lol
Keep up the good writing. Looking forward to more chapters. Great job on chapters six thru 10!!!
Ree-san (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 May 2017
That was a little disappointing. She went through all that for them all to act as if nothing happened? Little confused on that.
Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 May 2017
just finished reading this on ff great story you should post all the chapters here also
I came across your story and it is so intriguing and fascinating. It is nicely written also.
I know these are characters in fanfiction land but Inuyasha is such a pain in the ass. Sometimes it feels like he is a real person that you want to just jack up. LoL I could never understand why Kagome would want to stay friends with him promise or no, I would kick him to the curve. It seems like she is a gluten for pain. Inuyasha is an egostical, self-centered, lieing, cheating and so much more pig. With him being around Kikyo and having sex with her... he never washes up afterwards so he has got to smell bad and Kagome wants to love that. Well enough of Inu bashing for now.
Looking forward to more chapters (and maybe a little bit longer :) ) Love your story!
Just found your story looks good hoping to read more.
Very good story. Inuyasha isn't too good at covering things up,especially if he doesn't see it as a problem. Inuyasha didn't eat even though he's older and doesn't need to eat as often. I think he took the last ramen cup/s because he'd make sure he got what he wanted to eat.
Will sesshomaru help out the inutachi in some way? How will kagome get stronger and who will teach her?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Violla (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Dec 2016
Un bel inizio , Non vedo l'ora per vedere come la storia prosegue .
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