This is interesting!! I really want to read more!! Please udpate soon!!
Wow! Great story~ love it so muchhh ? really wanna know what happens next although I hope sesshomaru won't kill kagome. Hope you will update soon. Good luck!
I really like your story. I like how it flows and the plot seems very interesting! I hope you update soon. :)
Well despite the rape scene i think that this story can be great if you are careful and i like your writing .......thx for the story im looking forward for the next chapter!!!!♥
Love the story please update soon
Really like this story so far. Is there maybe an unplanned pregnancy in the future?? Ohhhh, wouldn't Sesshomaru be livid!! So many things you could do with this one! Can't wait to see!!;^)
love this fic so far
Ooooooh snap! I have to know what happens! Sesshomaru don't hurt Kaggy!
Very interesting! I like it!
I know that I am not the most eloquent person, much less in another language. But this story promises a lot.
Especially when it's Sesshoumaru's turn to get in conflict with his emotions and things get out of his control... Muahahaha~
Cough cough...
See you ^^U
I'm interested to see where this goes from here. Does he break down and fall in love with her? One thing that slightly bothered me was the setting. You have adequate descriptive writing about things such as opening a door, or him tearing her dress... but I'm not very clear on the setting. Does this take place in Japan where the door would slide shut, and her dress is a yukata? Or is it a western setting where the door swings shut and her dress has a bodice? These little details might help the story flow smoother.
And the deed is done. I'm intrigued of the reactions and politics that follow. Of course, we can't forget about the slow burn of attraction and angst. Thank you for the quick update! It was all I could think about after reading the first chapter! Although, take your time with this! I love the pacing of it.
please don't let her die!!! bad sesshy!!! huh
You did a wonderful job to a simple suggestion. It was brilliant and the lemon scene was enthralling. Your writing skills are top-notched. You have become one of my favorite writers and I look forward to more updates to this fascinating story. Excellent writing, keep it up. Oh by the way, I love the plot and the story of course.
Maybe a little back story on Kagome and Shippo and how they ended up Sessho's home before her fateful encounter with what seems to beher destiny now. Is she going to be a normal human or is she a miko with powers that she knows nothing about yet; something like now that she is mated, her dormant powers will awaken.
Thank you for reading my ramblings. lol :)
I was so interested in reading this fanfic but then you had to have him rape her. Well good luck with the story.
Noooo poor Kagome (!_!) I know Sesshomaru-sama will fall for her, but hope she won't be too much hurt by him.
I think this will be a wonderful story (^_^) Thank you for the quick update dear~
Oh my!!! Needles to say my attention is captured!!
Uh oh! Will Kagome give in easily? Hmmm. Not likely? Lol. Compliant but defiant? Interesting first chapter! Can't wait for more
wow what a wonderful story line... I enjoyed it very much... Please continue I want to see what Sesshomaru has in store for Kagome. Must be a good one... lol...
Well this escalated quickly!!
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