I wish there was more

Interesting. I like his story-telling of their story. It would be interesting to see how things turn out. I hope that you get back into the spirit of writing, especially if it is something you enjoy doing. I can't wait to see what else you come up with next :)

Very nicely written one shot. I wish you could add more on to the story. It was very sweet and romantic. Think about it...please, please. Fantastic job.

Great story, I love it so much. Even thought its a oneshot I wish you would continue it.

Great story, so far!  I can't wait to see what happens next.

I loved it. Too bad it's a one shot

I love this little story. Illness has nothing to do with writing. So don't worry write when you can. 

This is a lovely story! I'm so glad that you shared it with us for Halloween!

This story is so adorable and cute. I love it. Please continue to write great stories.