Hi there, I bet you thought I gave up on this story because I have not reviewed in awhile, nope I would'nt give up on one my favorite authors. I was just trying to get caught up on my favorite fanfiction stories. RL said no and I said yes FF is my stress reliever. I was saving this one for last because I knew reading this one would save the day and I was not disappointed. I just love this story.
So I stand corrected. Your plot twister with Inuyasha being alive and mostly innocent ruined it for me a little bit because I was hoping that he was guilty as hell and that Kagome was going find him kick his ass, torcher him and then kill him to get her revenge. Just when things were getting good between her and Sessho bam he shows (can you tell Yasha is not favorite character most of the time) up. But I have to admit you did a good job in bringing his sorry butt back into the picture. Even as a full demon he did'nt seem to have matured too much. I hope Kagome does not go and start having feelings for him again, Sessho is much better for her than him.
I love the way you got Sessho and Kagome to start having feelings for each other. Kagome having her first kiss from Sessho couldn't have been better. If I had my first kiss by a gorgeous hunk of a man like him, I probably would have been jumping all over the forest like a mad woman but she held her decorum. Nice move. Being in his pack I think he forgot to tell her that the position she holds technically is alpha female. Am I right?
This chapter 14 was very good. Does Inuyasha really think he can just pick up where he and Kagome left off before the tragedy? Like Sessho mused about that Inu does not deserve a woman like Kagome and I don't think he could handle her. Emotionally Kagome needs to mature and I hope Sessho will be her her first and only man to help her get to that point. Also Sessho thinks that mating her would end his bloodline because he thinks that their pups would all be hanyou but Kagome being as powerful as she is should surprise him and have full blooded pups, first one of course being a mini me Sessho. That would be so cute and each pup they have will have a combination of both their powers. They would be a hell of a family. Rin should fall in love with a handome youkai and have her life extended to match his, that way Sessho and Kagome won't lose her to human mortality.
Phew I talk too much. Need to quit here except to let you know what an exceptional and talented writer you are of all your stories. I look forward to updates on this story and Fire and Ice too. Fantastic job!
Another great update! I live the jealousy that pops up over the littlest things. I can't wait for you next update to see what happens with Inuyasha's transformation. Gyah! so good!
Ohh God!! Love triangle between Inu Brothers
Keep going please. Needed next chappie soon as possible.
Love their emotion. Ohh really love SesshKag romance.
Itoe (Chapter 14) - Mon 31 Oct 2016
Hello,
A wonderful story so far! I hope it is going to continue to be like this.
What I hope, though, is that this won't be a SessxKagxInu story.........
Really, I would be very sad! Dx
But as I said, I al enjoying this story so far. I like the way you put their emotions and their reactions to them.
Keep it going!
Cheers
Eva (Chapter 13) - Fri 21 Oct 2016
Out seems the brothers aren't done with their sibling rivalry. Kagome Mau kill Inuyasha after all.
Toni (Chapter 12) - Thu 20 Oct 2016
looking forward to the next chapter keep them coming
Alashia (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Oct 2016
What a great story! Hope you'll update soon!
Lynn (Chapter 13) - Wed 19 Oct 2016
Great story! I get excited when I get the update notification :) Please more!!
Dani (Chapter 13) - Mon 17 Oct 2016
Okay stop the cliff hangers :) I'm dying to see what those two do to each other over her.
Progress! With both brothers! :3. I love the rivalry here and look forward to more, hehehe. Thank you for another great update; I look forward to where you will take us next!
Eva (Chapter 12) - Sun 16 Oct 2016
I've just discord discovered this story and read it straight straight through.I'm enjoying so far.I'm assuming that Kagome Is relying on Sesshoumaru to verify whether Inuyasha is being truthful. She's going too need some time to put the pieces back together.
I understand that he was concerned she would purify him if he approached her right after that happened but he did abandon her not only to the elements but to her own thoughts as well. That would have been something like torture for the young woman who would have lost both her worlds in that moment.
Oh yay! Another update XD.
This was another great update; the love the conflictions of Kagome's emotions. I also love how caring Sesshoumaru is; Kagome is a lucky girl. Gyah! So good! what a great treat to start my Friday. Good luck with everything!!
Jean (Chapter 11) - Fri 14 Oct 2016
Lovedata the chapter! The fight was very well done, even if she didn't get her revenge. I wonder how the relationships between all 3 will change now and if Inuyasha will stay with them.
Marie (Chapter 11) - Thu 13 Oct 2016
My revenge has been stolen, wth!
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