| Hahaha, I'm sure Kaede loves every moment with the crazy family Kagome brought about though to old or not. (: Wonderful story thus far, I look forward to more!    
 
lonny (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016 | This is really good!! Hope you'll update soon:-)!!!    
 
Violla (Chapter 6) - Thu 01 Sep 2016 | Bellissimo spero che aggiorna presto il prossimo  capitolo.     
 | chapter 6 is difficult to read because the paragraphs need to be broken up. Please fix    
 | Also, maybe you should work on your spacing, because it is sometimes difficult to follow who is speaking. Since the transitions occur quickly you could include a few dialogues by one character and then in a new line by the next character. I know its alot of work but then the presentation would be as gr8 as the plot!    
 | Oh I like where this is going!!!! Gr8 chapters! Will wait for the next ones! :D    
 | I like the way this story is coming along. Though I do have one recommendation.    Generally you start a new paragraph anytime there's a change in scene, or a change  in who is speaking. This way you'll avoid walls of words. Just a thought.    
 | Good chap    
 | Just found this story and am throughly enjoying it.  Can't wait to see where you take it.    
 
Jaz (Chapter 4) - Wed 20 Jul 2016 | I believe you meant to write, This is the same scent as the Miko's well.    
 
Mona (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016 | Please update again soon.    
 | Trouble never far    
 
Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Wed 06 Jul 2016 | I love the story already. I can't wait for the next installment.    
 | I love this story really fun and interesting. Looking forward to seeing more.    
 | Well I just stumbled onto this story and I love it to pieces! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!    
 
Deana (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Jul 2016 | Good story. I'm very interested to see where this goes.    
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