| Keep posting. I like after the well closes storyline. Wrkin on one myself. Heaven only knws when I'll have it ready for others to read.LOL!!    
 | This chap just as good as the first. Well done.p.s. don't believe the haters.( smile)    
 | Great first chap looking forward to reading your work.    
 
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Wed 30 Dec 2015 | That was Sad But Beautiful.    
 
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Dec 2015 | That was Nice!!!    
 | I like it so far. If you get really crazy you might want to invest in getting yourself a bets to proof read for you.     
 | Welcome to the family! I like your tone and pace for this story and the dialog between the characters is spot on. *round of applause * keep at it! (^__^)    
 | I like it so far. Keep going!    
 
Mona (Chapter 2) - Wed 30 Dec 2015 | Great second chapter!    
 
Keo (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Dec 2015 | intersting start    
 
Mona (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Dec 2015 | Great, looking forward to reading more of this fanfic.  Hopefully you will be able to update soon.    
       
 
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