i have to say that i love your first fanfic! at first i was kinda thinking well, this is rather repedative of the movies, no offense it gets me when we get all the details we know already. but that comes from the fact that i probably read WAY too much fanfiction, but then as you started weaving your story and getting more detail into it, i find that i rather like it. Its canon enough that the characters are in form like they should be, but i see the ability for them to grow and change even if its only by a month. makes me wonder, and i kinda do hope it turns out this way if Kagome will turn into a demon! r0o loves that! >:3 either way. i cant wait to see more from you, and your brilliant self. welcome to dokuga! and update s0on!!!
-r0o